Comments : Liquid

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemma

    This is so clever and really deep. I'm amazed that I could get my head around it because I'm not in the best of health right now haha. But that just goes to show how well it's written. My favourite stanza was:

    "Dripping strings of emotion
    A melting web entangling my mind
    I have ceased to be
    Yet here I am"

    5/5

    Em xXx