Morbid...VERY morbid. May God find you peace at heart. Nice flow however, good job. 3/5

Suicide, apart of me just died
a bit of my soul got outside
when i read what i used to hide
fight, every day and every night
to convience my self, it will be allright
but i lie, my soul believes
cause something inside isn't a deceive
so i live to read your lines
and i return to the age of nine
so innocent and so secure
but now i'm ill, don't know the cure

I loved it, really.

Damn deep! Could picture it all in my mind as I read. Great job

What the hell, that was a good poem tho
XD