Beautiful

A great poem. Very nicely written and well thought out. :] The first stanza really caught my attention and held until the end.
"Torn between two people,
Torn between tow hearts.
Torn between two smiles,
Two images that won't part."

^my favorite stanza^
:] 5/5.

Very good poem, Josh. Every sentence was written perfectly. Words deep, and thoughtful. Great imagery. 5.5

Take care,

-Sarah A.

Very good poem, Josh. Every sentence was written perfectly. Words deep, and thoughtful. Great imagery. 5.5

Take care,

-Sarah A.