Wow that was really deep! i love it so much its the best poem i have seen on here! i love it it rocks!

The smile of your old love makes you want him back so find someone with a better smile.lol great poem=)

I feel you on this poem. thats how im feeling

Wow this expresses exactly who i feel about my ex! Great poem..x

Wow I LOVE this poem of yours!
I like the first stanza;; The last words of the 2nd and 4th sentences work heaps well together;;
The ending is excellent too; I like these sorta poems that don't rhyme all the way through, but they somehow "mesh" together nicely... Haha I sound weird Lol But yeh great poem hun;
Addin' this to my favourite poems :D

5/5 for sure!