Comments : I Am, the Fallen Last

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Impressive poem, I am truly speechless...

    The imagery that you're able to create is always stunning and remarkable and this poem is not an exception. You write the most original love poetry that I've ever read, endlessly creative and captivating.
    Keep writing and I'll keep reading your priceless poetry.

  • Wow i love it....

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    WOW! I'm literally without words so you blow my mind with this priceless piece of poetry.

    -Eden after midnight,
    I am infested with spiders,
    my skin, their webs!-

    ^This three lines, wow, wow, wow, they posses something unreachable, I truly can't describe your how much I admire your talent in this moment.


    --I am the angel fallen last;
    my heart the pages for your epitaph.--

    This two lines are simply stunning! They are so much more than brilliant!

    Whole poem is a masterpiece filled with so deep and intense atmosphere. You have truly grotesque and creative imagination and I deeply appreciate that in poetry. Amazing idea for poem and this is my new favorite one.

    Only thing that isn't fascinated me is the fact that I personally thin that you could end this with more power, but that is irrelevant thing when you look in the greatness of this piece.

    I'm honestly breathless, fantastically done!