Wow...
I love this from the first to the last line. You expressed emotions excellently and this poem deeply touched me. I can relate to this in a way and that made this piece even more powerful for me. Whole poem holds amazing atmosphere and I like your choice of words. Very original love piece, one of the best and the most touching I've read in a while.
I like your writing style, it is truly great.
Keep up!

Amazing, amazing, amazing!!! Excellently written poem, filled with emotions and captivating in every way. You always manage to touch me with your deep and sincere poetry and this piece is not an exception.
I can't choose my favorite part, I simply like this poem from the beginning to the end. I can relate to conflicted feelings that you expressed here. Outstanding love poem.
Keep writing!