That was awesome, u die a good job.

Thank you for commenting my poem =]
I did indeed like this poem very much. It's as if all the feelings and emotions are described and explained perfectly in this piece of art.
"So for once, I'm asking for you to lie and maybe lie about the lie. Because there's a chance for survival if the truth isn't real. So lie to me baby. Lie. Because it can't be over. It just can't." I loved the ending. Sometimes it's better to lie so that you might never feel the intense pain and heartbreak that truth does to people. Lovely! 5/5
Nicole

I loved how you began and ended your piece the same way. It was effective in getting your message across and those last phrases really stick with the reader after they finish reading. I loved the style you choose to write in because it was unique and you master this stlye perfectly. Not once was I bored throughout this piece and I was left wanting more! I loved your beginning to the second stanza. It was the line in the piece that stuck out to me the most and completed the poem for me. The flow was flawless as always and the way you incorpirated the title into the poem was perfect. Well done *5/5*