Aww thats really sweet. i like how u write
xx

Because you love me without thought
My heart will always cry
Because the only wish for me
Is to swallow these pills and die.

^ thoughtless love is TRUE love. and it is a beautiful, if sad, thing when people think of others selflessly. this was a great poem. so sad. but i could see the image. and the tenderness is beautiful. great job, hun. thank you for the comment on my poem as well.

Wow... just another wonderful poem
i like ur style of writing

I could clearly see it in my minds eye
i love your work
great job

Because you love me without thought
My heart will always cry
Because my only wish for me
Is to swallow these pills and die.

^^^these words are so very sad, Michael:(
After my son was born I never had that wish again. With him I got a feeling of being needed and even though one day, my role will be less important, I would never want to leave him before my time is due. No matter how bad life gets me down.
You have really upset me with this ending. You should always remember your children see you as their hero!

*hugs you tight*

Ingrid 5/5