Thats really sad, good flow well done xx

This one is really well written. very interesting... liked the flow of the poem!

Wow.. this is a powerful poem to me right now. it has a lot of meaning and pain to it .. but its a good poem loves

I love it... you should check out 'An Abuse Story' its a poem of mine you might like but anyways... this is great the flow is flawless great job... 5/5

Very good flow with each stanza. each line is short but gets across a very strong message.

very well written and worded :)

the stanza i enjoyed the most was the last one, it sums up the hole poem and is the most powerful part (in my opinion)

Wow thats poem hits me deeply but good job on how u wrote it keep up the good work