Good job ^^

This is good

I love this poem its so good .....plz read mine and comment mine thx

Beautiful. has a good rhythm and is steady but keeps me reading on and on, excellent use of words, nothing to strong and over powering but just right. :) 5/5

I know how that is I wounder that to will they see me for the mistakets or the things that where good and how it will end up I like it alot my fav lines are
My memory's in pieces
My anger lies in dust
Even my best moment's
were just objects of my lust
^^ plz keep writing I rated on ur newest one I'll rate on this one to ^^