Yeah Im the first one! lol, This poem has a great message and was a pretty good poem all-in-all. I didn't like the rhyming though, sometimes when i was reading i forgot that you were rhyming.. so maybe take it out all together. Its just a suggestion. But again, good poem! Keep it up! :]

I love the way you write it , nice flow, simple worda, great jop

I love the flow in this poem..well in all your poems ive read so far
5/5

This poem was amazing. The flow was flawless. And this was well written and well thought out. You really put your heart into this piece, which I'm sure you do with all of your poems. lol. :] Anyway. Simply amazing. 5/5.

I loved this poem. I can kind of relate. It also had a nice flow to it. 5/5 =D

Another wordy poem, also brilliantly written and I really adore the first and the fourth stanza. Thanks for sharing this 5/5 poem!!!

What a wonderful way to express you feelings
i love this poem and ima put you in my favourite authors
well done again mate (yes i am Australian no need to ask)
5/5
love it

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Aw I love this poem, well done!