Comments : A prisoner's plea

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Courtney
    Welcome back. What a great piece to come back with. Love the imagery.

    You are the key to life,
    Hear this inmate's plea,
    Darling, grant this wish,
    Just love and be loved by me.

    I really loved the ending of your poem. It is funny how some love can make you feel like a prisoner, and others make you soar :)
    Great job!
    Love Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Courtney,

    This is the first poem I have read by you and it's about my favorite subject, lol!
    It's sweet and the very last sentence I love best because this is really what it all comes down too...

    hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 14 years ago

    by debbylyn

    "You are the key to life,
    Hear this inmate's plea,
    Darling, grant this wish,
    Just love and be loved by me. "

    Beautiful words of love.....nicely writtten!!!

  • 14 years ago

    by Elapsed

    Wow!!.. this was breathtaking! Plenty of expressed emotions in this wonderful piece. I also liked the ending very much and found it quite easy to relate too. Fantastic job!!