Comments : When the Wind Stands Still

  • 16 years ago

    by Armada the Gestalt

    I like the end line especially, yes. At times the rythm can be a tad forced, which is often the case, but otherwise, a good poem, well done. ^^

  • 16 years ago

    by BurriedFaceDown

    Good, I really like it, but in the end are you the Devil?