Comments : Moving on

  • 16 years ago

    by Forever Broken

    I can relate to this poem a lot.

    But now the jokes on you; I found someone who really cares,
    and when she hurt you like you hurt me; I wasn't there.

    ^^^ this stanza really got to me. I feel the EXACT same way. He left me for her and it broke my heart. And when she broke his heart I wasn't around for him to lean on anymore. Great job. Way to express your emotion. check out some of my work. 5/5
    kat