Awww this is so adorabley sweet and romantic.

Love it.

Hey,
wow that such a sweet and romantic poem, I think that the girl you wrote it for is going to be really happy with it;)
The rhyming was done great, almost every line rhymed and it doesn't sounds forced. The poem flows nicely so I must say that this poem is going into my favorites.
keep it up;) 5/5
kisses Stephanie

DAVID AND KRISTY FOREVERRRR.

:p

Good job.

I loved this poem. It was kinda long but it held my attention. It had a nice flow and wounderful word choice. 5/5

This was so perfectly written.

I really liked it.

It had a really good flow.

5/5

Take care.

O i love this poem. it is so romantic and sweet. good job. 5/5

WOW. great poem. perfect flow. i liked it alot 5/5

Yes agree with the others, you had great flow, and it was very sweet!

Great poem

Aww. Adorable poem. :]
Keep writing! I haven't seen a new one from you in foreverrr.
Since, I'm back..[Temps] I'll be awaiting another piece from you!

Wonderful. absolutely beautiful. very well written :) 5/5

Wow! gr8 poem!!
5/5

This is one of the best poems i have read,
I wish i could of felt the words you just expressed.
It would have been something.
Anyway it was great ;D
5/5

Its a good think that you found someone that cares as much about you as you do them. that seems rare now adays. I can relate to half of it, The giving care part. and the day you write a poem isnt good Apocolypse?

This was beautiful. What an adorable love poem! It was filled with sincerity and it really worked well poetically.
I really enjoyed the read. Love poems are often very cliche, but this wasnt, it had your own little style in there :]
Really well done.
5/5