I really like your style of writing and i enjoy reading your poems.. they are really powerful and meaningful and you do a great job writing them! keeep it up =) .. i really enjoyed this one as well. your poems are really sad and you have a great way of making the reader feel what you are going thru. nice job!

I love the honesty and emotion in this poem, it makes it so sad. The flow is awesome and the beginning and end are really strong. My favourite stanza is:

"You look past me and say ever so softly,
I can't deal with this,I can't bear it.
And I understand why,
you never said you love me."

It brought tears to my eyes because of the moment of sad realisation.

5/5

Em xXx

I liked the flow and the way you expressed your emotions ... they were flawless. I could relate with everything you said which made the poem real for me. Well done *5/5*

Waw nice work5/5

This poem is very easy for me to relate to and i can completly understand what you are going through right now. I almost started to cry because it was almost as if all the emotions i am feeling but had no words to described where just pulled out right there on the paper. your amazing. Keep it up.

I loved this poem its really good

OMG so relating to this.. i understood everything you wrote , and the way u worded was amazing 5/5 i loved it

I really enjoyed this poem it is very easily relate able my favorite part is...

"I want the strength to live,
and to love."

Its pretty much a quote of my life

You write very well. i have read 3 poems of yours so far and liked them all. keep up the good work.