I really like this one ... there is something about it that is like strange yet deep at the same time ...
i love it

One of my favorites!!!
I feel the twists of the words!
very well written 5/5

Amazing word choice. Interesting way to put such a simple emotion, but it speaks a lot about who you are. It's a very nice piece and I think you have penned another piece of perfection. The style is simple and ordinary, yet somehow you've made it your own. Good job. Love it.