You may very well be insane but your poetry is awesome, makes people think when they read it.5/5

When i read your poems i have to read it slowly so i can understand (or think that i understand) most of the time ppl just read it quickly and not really stoping and taking thier time to really understand the emotion or anything really. so great job i love your poems.

WOW, that was amazing, i dunno what to say to that, my heart beat quickened my mind raced, the edges of the words cut the silence like a knofe, it was, amazing

You know, I really gave this poem a 5/5 because it was so different. It was almost refreshing to see a new style that I myself have yet to see. Although it is more of a blog than a poem, I stil find it very emotional and you can feel it with every sentence that passes.

The begining of the poem was almost as if it was pretty good. If you could do a whole poem out of that, and maybe make the lines a little longer im sure it would be beyond amazing. Because within those 6-8 lines you held a rhythm and you kept it from faultering just long enough to start your rant =)

Great Work.

It's not just a poem but a heart and mind revealed in words, just wonderful, a comment about reading it slowly is so correct. To understand it one should concentrate.