I dont know why i didnt read this poem after reading your first one. i like this one much more, and you still managed to spell out Miss you, the word you spelled out wraps what you are feeling in the poem up like a sweet piece of candy, great job

you spelled out I miss you
somehow I forgot to press "I"
on my last message.

But once again great work, nest time I hope your Secret message gets even longer and it wraps the poem up so deeply it makes you want to cry.

luved it great job keep up the good work

i like this one better than the first one. but i find it difficult to read (too long lines... maybe because i didn't read/write lots in english untill now)

hey another great poem, like the hidden message thing
good job
jemma xxx

I liked this one too. Any possibility u could comment on some of my poems? Well anywho keep up the good work

Great job!!!!! i give you a 5!!!! u should write more!!!!