Comments : Darkness Calls All

  • 16 years ago

    by BurriedFaceDown

    Wow i like how in the end you are the Devil. And how you are praying out to God.
    But at first I was thinking God watches everyone, but then you said you were the Devil and it made sense *5*
    >SheDevil<

  • 15 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    Another powerful poem didnt rite much but it does say a lot. this was my favorite part cuz i can realte to it.
    Never ending
    pain i see

    feeling down
    inside me

    illustration
    of my soul

    fighting back
    my black hell

    Awesome job!

    TaKe CaRe,
    Frenchy