Wow, this was actually quite good. [though a little too short for me]
I can really relate to this poem, which is one reason why I liked it so much.

"It meets my wrist and with a deep, tense breath, they fall in love."
^this line right here was one of my absolute favorites, and I loved how you didn't write the poem in a sad way, but more in a happy way if you know what I mean.
5/5
~gabriella