Very good poem. Everything was perfect starting with the flow. It was on point and not all over the place. Another thing I absolutely loved was the fact that portrayed your emotions very well throughout the whole piece. I think a lot of ppl can relate to this and that's what makes it so real.

"the most disturbing thoughts
start to seep through my head
I'm tempted to end my life
I crave to join the dead"
^^my fav part of the attire =)

The voice and vocabulary were beautiful.
Overall, perfectly and beautifully written =)
5/5

xxPaSsIoNaTe kIsSeSxx