Comments : To: Bill, undeserving of the title 'Dad'

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    "As I stare into the mirror's eyes
    I see myself and with me your lies
    I see the destruction you sowed
    the pain with remembrances that ask how"

    Sounds like you were writing about true love. These lines got me thinking of a broken heart, something like I kinda feel right now. 5/5 It's great.

  • 16 years ago

    by manic moments

    =(

    "Your family comes in second place, far behind
    No consolation prize for us except the tears we cried
    No love from our father, instead we're gifted...
    Gifted with the lies that you lied... "

    your gifted with talent to write tripp

    your writing style - ectasy

    niquee xox