Comments : Remembering A Special Moment

  • 16 years ago

    by Elapsed

    Really enjoyed this piece whole heartedly, It hit so close to home for me. I could feel the ever powerful emotions that was expressed so well within. I totally feel for you and hope all is well.. a fantastic job on this poem!!

    "I remember this cause it was a special day
    The day I carved our name into this tree
    Also the day I surprised her with a ring
    Yes the day I asked her to marry me
    An amazing day such as this"

    wow!!.. loved this stanza mate!

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Aaron
    Beautiful memories you have penned. I can feel how special this was for you.
    Take Care Cindy