Yeah, it's kinda sad, that's really the only poems i can create tho, so yeh, good work i like!

Wow girl thats a greatttt! poem!!! your like BAM! lol. lol.

I liked this one!!!
it was intense

I really like this
it really had a nice effect the way you went from yesterday to a minute to a moment
and u had such strong expression through so few words
great job
5/5