Comments : Fight For LiFe

  • 16 years ago

    by Noir

    I absoultely love this piece, each line can and could be used as a memorable quote, I do find the lack of stanza's a bit off-putting, but you're words and articulation sold me.

    Well done!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    Never bother for those who hate you.
    Pay attention for those who love you...
    ^^^
    Excellent lines!

    Life doesnt start tomorrow,
    And dint end yesterday.
    ^^^
    I think you may mean "didn't" in the second line.

    A very soul touching piece with such a deep message within the lines.
    Very inspirational piece
    Luanne