Comments : Perhaps

  • 19 years ago

    by Valerie

    Good poem. I'm the chick that writes all love poems and only uses abcb. Well to answer your question of why....When I write it just comes out that way. I've tried writing w/out rhyme or abac, or abab but I don't like the way my poems turn out when I do that. I wont like anything that doesn't sound smooth, it's just how I roll.

  • 15 years ago

    by jescelle

    O man......... i might be waaay off here, but if that was about me bck then.... damn i feel dumb if it was, cuz then how could i have not known earlier? lol i feel retarted now.... oh well. hey, i mss ya u know. not like that, but like, just having u as a friend. i know u never wanted anything bad 4 me nd that if i wasnt so sad and pigheaded i wouldnt have lost your friendship either.... and im sorry for what u had to go thru in being with/breaking up with me/m living there..... that was bad all around but i glad u did it for me. it showed that no matter what feelings were lost, u didnt stop caring. id like to star talking again... jus b/c u were such a big part of my life, as a friend... u gave me a family u know? i might get stupid sometimes josh but u know how i am lol... i mean well, really. but hey, idk if you'll get this, but if you do, just try talkin to me? im differet and just looking for a really good old friend. hope ur doing well.
    jescelle