Hehehe... baby love this is so cute... and oh so true too, except one thing your not ugly intimidating, maybe but ugly, no... i really like this one it gives me a great mental image

Inner demon...so good! It gave me the chills at the beginning and it got to the point and I understood the entire poem. Good JOB! 5/5

It was really.. err.. demonically cute!! Hehe.. I really think it is very nice and kinda honest.. We all have inner demons.. [And I really hate mine].. Keep up the good work!

Fave stanza:

My inner demon is my truth
My outer demon is my lie
I am my own demon
Because I am afraid to die

Soo true!!!