A well written & beautifully penned poem...great job, keep it up 5/5

This poem was strong. this is how you feel. ah. well the flow was great and it flowed, i just kept reading it over and over again cause it flowed so well....

5/5 David

Hey hun..
so sorry not been on here recently had loads happening!! but like your poem! its strange some poems ie mine you lol you read and you can tell they aint written om how tht person is feeling at this time if you know what mean and then you get some like this one and you can tell its been written how someone is actually feeling it and experiencing it now.. so i say if its sometihng your going through now then just try and go with the flow because youll look back and think you did me a favour by not being with me no more!! i know it sucks feeling but youll see after awhile itll be ok sweet.. but really like poem and keep writting it all down and well done xhx

Thats really good poetry but very sad

* Verry good poem !