Comments : Missing Part [Acrostic]

  • I like this one and its meaning

  • 16 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Very sweet poem!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Very nicely written acrostic. The flow was good which is usually hard to do with an acrostic poem.

    However, I felt the lines could of been longer, just because it was an acrostic doesn't mean you always have to use just one word, you can use sentences.

    Over all a nice short and to the point piece of poetry. Keep up the good work.

    Peace, Joe

  • 16 years ago

    by JEFF

    Very creative, great short poem.5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    Waw, realy sweet
    i love the simplisty and the feeling behind 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    I am inspired about your poem. I like the style, I am gonna try it too insh'Allah.