OMG I loved this, it was dark and cold.. 5/5 keep up the good work.

Interesting and I often see the color of blood dark like black in the dark that you have given the rose....... Goooood

Nice. . A very shadowy and chilly poem. The formation was truly fantastic,

The screaming echoes of my massacre haunt me
And my devotion was lost in the palm of destiny
Sorrow keeps slitting the air from my throat
While my killers r gone and won't ever get caught
^^^^^^^
*This verse was quite startling. I liked it, very well write.

[5.5]

Best wishes,

Sarah

Excellent job
I really enjoyed reading this poem
!!
5/5
Great work this poem was very dark

Its deep, cold, dark, fantastic, amazing, gorgeous poem
keeo it up
5/5

~gIrL!~

A very well write. Good use of words and the structure of the poem is very interesting. Really a dark poem. Wonderful!

My innocence was plundered out of me
And now I'm weaker than I would ever be
--fav. part
Sorrow keeps slitting the air from my throat
While my killers r gone and won't ever get caught
--they'll pay for what they did
beyond 5/5

Another brilliant poem. cograt's to you on this poem.

Wow. This was so strong and yet full of anger and loss. I loved it. Please keep up the good work!
5/5

With Love,
-Ally

This was quite amazing. I got your message completely.

The screaming echoes of my massacre haunt me
And my devotion was lost in the palm of destiny
Sorrow keeps slitting the air from my throat
While my killers r gone and won't ever get caught

^That's my favorte part too, so much passion in only four lines.

This was absolutely amazing...
You have me speechless.
I honestly don't know what to say
(Yet again...)
Your words are truly haunting and really
make me think.
This was such a powerful and deep read.
Your words were so strong
and sent an instant chill up my spine
due to their intensity and power.
You really have such a stunning and unique style
that haunts the readers thoughts
and keeps them reading!!
Amazing poem!!

Wonderful and Breathcatching.I am suffering of being silent too,and people as you said don't understand what can silence do to some sad or depressed,it could kill him.As well as this, the title of the poem is really beautiful and so touching.

well done,well written5\5...