This was a great poem. You have great imagery. I was left speechless I had to have my sister read it. Wow nice job!

I really like this man, its tough and sensitive at the same time. thats tough to do. It kinda reminds me of a radiohead line

"you want me, come and get me. ill be waiting with a gun and a pack of sandwiches"

in my book if you have been compared to radiohead you have done something special.

Awesome poem! Way to go on this one. I loved the emotion. You have real talent, dont ever waste that!

-xx-

5/5

Great poem.

Astounding! Immense imagery I really liked it. Extemely well written and an extensive use of vocadulary :P

Wow. definitely paints a great picture...

It will take you in and rip you to pieces,
Throwing you out, with cuts and creases

^ i understand compleeeeeeetely......

great job.