Comments : Reflection

  • 16 years ago

    by Gabba Gabba Hey

    This is really good, it's deep and makes you really think. I think I can relate in a way...wow!
    There are some minor grammatical mistakes though- in the first line of the third stanza it should probably be 'I'm tired /of/' not 'I'm tired to' or you could say 'I'm too tired to'. Also you wrote commas instead of periods! Mirrors should be plural in the fourth stanza, the same is true for 'glass' in the fifth.
    All things considered, this really was a great poem!

    Rock on!

    Toni!