It's very well written. Good one. But try to avoid writing with caps on. And if you sperate the lines properly then that'd be better to read.

Great poem, i enjoyed reading it:D 5/5

Nice poem..

Try avoiding caps.. (It looks better without)
^-^

Other then that, you have a really good friend!

=]

Good poem...

I wish one day my best friend will write something this beautiful for me like you did for your friend.
it's very good poem i enjoyed reading it