Awwww....so sweet. great poem, so heartfelt...keep up the wonderous work. i hope everything works out for you as well!!!

Nice I loved it, great work....

Xgay pridex

I really liked this it was full of emotion

I can feel the emotion coming through, I love this.
GAY PRIDE!!!!

Nice one.. just a little bit of amendment, but depends how one reads the poem!

Live and love and laugh and cry
He's the one I'll be with
I'll love him until I die

"Live, Love, Laugh and Cry"
I think it flows better this way.

Overall keep it up.!