I liked, had alot of deep feelings in it. Like you wanted someone to love you, and to hold you.

- Good job, keep it up

Awe!...this was so sweet..

the only thing i saw wrong that u might concider changing is that "except" shuld be "accept" unless u didnt mean it that way, but it was really sweet! ;)

<3 Aly

Awww i liked this it was really short and cute we all want to be accepted

Oh.. wow short but it said mucho..
amazing job.. love it. =)