Awesome poem! Way to go on this one. I loved the emotion. You have real talent, dont ever waste that!

-xx-

5/5

Emotion, emotion, emotion! Thers so much emotion in a short and simple poem. It brings me great envy to say you have such talent to confine all this energy into a short and elegant poem.

WHOAAAA. can you say talented

Word choice, flow, emotion, all of it. great work! I luv your writing =]

Beautifully worded poem. :) I enjoyed reading it. 5/5

I LOVE IT!!
it showed alot of emotion and talent ^_^
i love your poems
keep up the good work

<3 dominique