Another well writen poem liked it brill hun!1

I agree with you that most people may not like it and because it doesn't sound like a poem in anyway but as i used to say "poems are feelings after all" so if this what you feel i will tell you nice poem and good job and if this what you feel i will tell you cheer up. you live once so don't waste it with a depressed face. smile and life will smile back to you. if you don't have happiness then go find it and don't stand waiting for it.