Comments : Towards the final solution

  • 16 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    "To-wards the final solution,
    I stand and fight.
    To-wards the final solution,
    I reach out and seek for light.
    To-wards the final solution,
    I remain constant and believe to trust.
    To-wards the final solution,
    Work and accomplish I must."

    Amazing repetition of "To-wards the final solution" gives the poem, this stanza a greater effect to the poem.

    "Do I have everything I need
    would I have to bleed" I think this shows that if you have everything you need what more is there? Which would be a question what else is there for a person to do but "Bleed"

    "Can you sense my fear
    I'm afraid it might be near" I like the rhyming here. This is a good choice of words.. fear and being afraid are exactly the same thing but the way you put it together made me think that you are scared and you know its coming.. and your afraid of the fact that you know you are going to end up being scared.

    "I have come so far
    although it felt like walking on tar
    I was able to see the star," This tells me that if you wait for something for so long, and have moved on from something for a very long time. the thing you want is right infront of you and you "werent able to see the star"

    "I have come to a conclusion
    Some may think its an illusion
    A way to my destruction
    Surely a steady construction
    But its my solution
    The final solution " I love how this ends in a cliff hanger, not telling readers what your final solution is. the final rhyme scheme here is great everything fits together perfectly. Yet again! a good write!