Comments : Deception

  • 16 years ago

    by Diana

    This poem really touched me hun, because I have experienced this myself. I just never had the courage to admit it to others. Great poem!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Once again a great poem... it's very nice and beautifully written. I love it !

  • 16 years ago

    by Erika

    I really enjoyed this poem sweetheart. It's like you understand everything that's inside my head or vise versa. Seeing someone express their thoughts and feelings this way shows me that I don't have to keep it bottled up inside. Great job! Love Erika

  • 16 years ago

    by Jaymee

    Wow this one is quite depressing, but I like it. Good flow throughout and the ending was great!

  • 16 years ago

    by Jackie

    I love it! The ending was unexpected, which is what made the poem go from good to great. Overall it's an excellent write and it flowed very nicely. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    Really well done! This was so emotional, and I loved your choice of words. This line was amazing:
    Can no one see the tears I shed
    Intermingling with the rain
    I loved how you worded that. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by jennifer

    Wow Dennis, fantastic poem!! Were you reading my mind when you wrote it?

  • 16 years ago

    by TwistedAngel xx

    Love it.
    u write in the same style as i do, simple and short and sweet. gets to the point quicker.
    wonderful poem
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Cute but sad poem, I like it =)

  • 16 years ago

    by damont

    Wonderful poem although it was sad it was well written and the point was very clear. keep writing

  • 16 years ago

    by talesha

    Great poem and superb ending