Wow Kim, I too almost felt frustrated when reading this poem haha. That's because of the words you pick and the structure of your poem. You don't finish sentences and that creates tension.

Really great job! Keep up this work! 5/5

Again, love. 5/5 your style is awsome. niice.

Love the poem. keep on writing. =)

Nice one. it really makes me frusterated just reading it! lol. i speak the truth. wonderful format and very nice. 5/5 ~KM~