Comments : Wine

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    Keep on writing :D

  • 16 years ago

    by neo

    You are the best

  • 16 years ago

    by Gabba Gabba Hey

    Wow..this is good on several different levels..and you can look at it many different ways...good job

    only thing: in the third stanza, it shouldn't be 'have', but 'has'!