Comments : The Beginning Of An End

  • 16 years ago

    by PygmyPuff

    Its long with long lines. Its not very appealing to the eye, but im sure if it was written out without the boundaries of the webpage it would have more physical flow. Im not sure how the stanza structure was devolped, i do assume it was due to the randomocity of the leftsided brain. If some sort of conformity of size (width and length) could be brought togehter it would have postivie affects.