Comments : The world isnt what it used to be

  • 16 years ago

    by ArqusZed

    A very smooth read,
    I like the 'calm before the storm'-apocalyptic vision.

    "Our hope of a new life is very thin
    The world has finally catch us in its spin
    Looks like its going to win"

    Beautiful triple rhyme, although I believe the 'catch' should have been a 'caught'.