Sweeeeeeeeeet...aahhh

This is a great love poem really hits close to home.... Great use of words xoxoxo 5/5

Hiya,
I like this poem even though it confused me slightly. I must say that 'confused' is my usual state.
Is this about love you wish to find, or love that has temporally departed?
Take care
Michael

We Hampshire poets should stick together! 5/5

Hey,
I like this poem,
thank you for your comment, it's an old poem, and I haven't written for a long time now..anyway, I find it hard to write about love and happy things when I am in love, I am better at writing sad things with a broken hart, which is really sad to say though!

Anyway, keep up your good work, and I hope everything went fine on sunday!
cheers

That is so sweet... you can tell you care for this guy a lot. Great poem and I hope everything works out! :)