Oh wow jesse. honestly, that's breathtaking. it's kinda abstract, you know what i mean? absolutely stunning.

"Flip the box over
"Made just for two"
Broken hearts survive alone
But I'd rather for me and you
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Somewhere between happy
And going completely insane
A little black box with two hearts inside
But broken they will not remain"

another amazing poem. these two stanzas were the best. i agree with anonymous lover..kinda abstract but it makes it that much better. i hope you get the girl. rly i do!! this is just beautiful. 5/5

Awsome poem.
I know how it feels to be heart broken =|
Keep up the good work!

Aww, i hope ur happy ending comes soon but u have 2 finish the fairy tale first, there's just no short cuts wen it comes 2 love and happyness. 5/5
~me~

Good job. i couldn't write anything like that

Cool