Comments : No one dies a virgin

  • 16 years ago

    by Tim Mauntler

    I liked the overall message and loved that you didn't force the rhymes... the flow was great... now that i think about it, i should have given you a 5/5... lol, sorry
    anyway, great poetry
    keep writing

  • 16 years ago

    by Daz Mellow

    Lol the last two line was priceless, and I like the message over all. Anyhoo, good write. ^_^

  • Again really good poem, my favorite lines are...
    I might be scared from past events
    Believe me you know about this
    But i gave my heart for you to heal
    I granted you that bliss

    If you break my heart into a billion pieces
    If you tear my soul apart
    No one will ever get the chance
    To heal my broken heart

    I can really relate to this one... I have a quote that says something like...
    "With all the times my heart has been broken, ripped apart and shredded... I don't know if I have any left to give to anyone else"

    Great work 5/5 :)