A little rough at some parts but its a good poem and i like the feel of it
good job =D

Aww!

This is so good.
Wait - So she's in love with her friend?

*Good poem*
5/5

Great poem..
As said above, a little rough on places, but still...it is a strong good poem =]
Keep up the good work

Please dont bluff ..u r definitely not a novice .. I really like the feel of the poem ...eagerly waitin to see more from u

Sweet poem..i like it... keep writting..take care..5/5

Wow this poem rocks
wonderful poem and full of emotions
i loved how you mentioned the things that he/she is doing it for you