Quite a wish.. I agree with you, people should be careful of what they wish for..

Great poem, like always ;)

This was good, but sad. keep it up 5/5

This is pretty good =)

Umm, wow. I liked it alot. It is very sad though. Great word choice and nice flow. It would be nice if it was longer but it is still great the way that it is :D 5/5