OMG I ABSOLUTLY LOVE YOUR POEM I UNDERSTAND COMPLETLY WERE YOUR COMING FROM! GOOD JOB!

For me, this is definantly a successful poem. You say so much without going into too much detail, which creates a better environment for the reader to relate to. You do a great job with imagery to create this picture in my mind of a lonely girl at a loss. A great poem, and please make the effort to keep writing more.

--gRnGaNgL